HMD

Before we get on to the critiquing I have a few things to cover regarding my characterization of America which you might want to take note of!

1.  It is not my intention for America to be a history book when I play him, even if he is from World War II. Generally speaking, I am going to go by rule of funny. Because, in canon, that's what Himaruya does.
   
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2. Furthermore, I will be avoiding b'awww (though completely justified b'awww) regarding the Japanese and America in WWII. America will regard Japan as an enemy, but it will be presented in traditional, silly, Hetalia fashion.
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If either of these things bother you (and these things alone), you have a problem with Hetalia, not my characterization, and I can't help you. Otherwise, fire away! (ip logging is off, and anon is on!)